Pronouns, modifiers, and parallelism
Three rules that share one idea: every part must point at the right thing.
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Pronouns
Two checks, always in this order:
1. Is there exactly one thing it could refer to? If a pronoun could point at two nouns, it's ambiguous and the answer is the choice that names the noun instead. The test does offer "just repeat the noun" as a correct answer, and students reject it because it sounds clumsy. Clumsy and correct beats elegant and ambiguous.
2. Does it match in number? This is where the points are:
- Each, every, either, neither, one, anyone, everyone, someone, nobody are singular. Each of the researchers submitted his or her report.
- A company, a team, a nation is it, not they, in US usage.
- Everyone is singular even though it clearly means many people.
Who vs. whom — who is the subject, whom the object. Substitute he/him: if him fits, use whom.
Its/it's, their/there/they're, whose/who's — expand the contraction. If the expansion is nonsense, the apostrophe is wrong.
Modifiers
A modifying phrase attaches to whatever noun comes right after the comma. That's the whole rule, and the test builds every modifier question on breaking it.
✗ Having studied the samples for a decade, the conclusion was inescapable.
The conclusion did not study anything. The subject after the comma must be the one doing the studying:
✓ Having studied the samples for a decade, the researchers found the conclusion inescapable.
When you see a sentence opening with an -ing or -ed phrase and a comma, look immediately past the comma. If the noun there can't perform the action, that choice is out — regardless of how it reads.
The same applies to single words: only, just, almost, nearly attach to whatever they sit next to. She only reviewed three papers and She reviewed only three papers mean different things.
Parallelism
Items in a list or a comparison must have the same grammatical form.
- ✗
The role requires analysing data, writing reports, and **to present** findings. - ✓
...analysing data, writing reports, and **presenting** findings.
Paired conjunctions must bracket parallel structures:
- not only ... but also
- either ... or
- neither ... nor
- both ... and
Whatever grammatical form follows the first half must follow the second: not only in the lab but also in the field, not not only in the lab but also the field.
Comparisons must compare like with like:
- ✗
The climate of Peru is milder than Chile.(a climate against a country) - ✓
The climate of Peru is milder than **that of** Chile.
That of and those of exist for exactly this, and they're correct answers far more often than they look like they should be.